Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country. In your letter, you should say: -why you want to work there -what skills and work experience you have -inquire about details, such as salary, benefits, and hours
Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time and we haven’t met since you have migrated to Canada. So, I am writing this letter to ask about the employment opportunities in Canada related to my profile.
My productivity is not increasing for the past five years since I have started working as a Software developer in India. So, I have decided to explore some opportunities in foreign countries and I learned about Canada. I listed out the parameters of personal and professional lives and found that there are plentiful benefits to live in Canada, mainly due to the better quality of lifestyle which at present is happening in India.
Since you know I work as a software engineer in HCL technologies for almost half a decade. I have gained skillful knowledge in the architecture of designing databases, programs, and setting up IT infrastructures for my clients. Besides, I checked for the reviews on the Glassdoor website related to my profile and was not satisfied due to insufficient information. So, could you please provide further details about the salary, benefits, and monthly working hours of my role?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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- Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... doing well Its been a long time and we havent met since you have migrated to Canada S...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the architecture of designing databases programs and setting up IT infrastructur...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...up IT infrastructures for my clients Besides I checked for the reviews on the Glassd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90721649485 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88438796109 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 194.0 16.3608247423 1186% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 952.0 76.5299724578 1244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 194.0 16.8248392259 1153% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 4.34317383033 852% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235109333493 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235109333493 0.0766984524023 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122938812575 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517590649796 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.7 8.37731958763 1178% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -125.43 70.7449484536 -177% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.9 7.45979381443 1058% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.57 7.59969072165 231% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 79.6 8.54432989691 932% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 8.15463917526 699% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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