Some people say that nowadays there is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? Give relevant examples from your experience.
Most people argue that day to day conversations among members of a family are reducing drastically. I concur with this statement. Further, the below paragraphs will discuss my viewpoint and provide explaination to why is this happening and what can be done about this situation.
In modern society, everyone is coerced to eam a living, providing minimal time to devote to his or her family. Parents have to leave their young ones with paid caregivers. For example, a recent study shows that there is a 30% surge in day schools and creche facilities in the last few years. Because of this, children get less attention from their progenitors which leads to communication gap among them.
The influence of western culture and implementation of nuclear family system has made matters worse. In older times, people used to live in joint families and had important discussions during lunch and dinners. However, this site is difficult to witness these days. Consequently, there is a downfall in social interaction among relatives.
To tackle these issues, simple efforts from individuals are required. Firstly, either a parent or a grandparent should be present with their young ones all the time and preach them importance of togetherness. Secondly, a regular group event like a vacation or a holiday should be planned often to keep a family unit closer and cultivate a loving bond.
In conclusion, it is true that more and more people are becoming distant from their family members with the changing lifestyles and adapting foreign cultures. It is advisable to take appropriate measures to solve such problems before it is too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03745318352 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73407213584 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 267.0 20.2975951904 1315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1345.0 106.682146367 1261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 267.0 20.7667163134 1286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 103.0 7.06120827912 1459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125428301794 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125428301794 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668378239977 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216149058772 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 135.8 13.0946893788 1037% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -199.53 50.2224549098 -397% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.4 11.3001002004 950% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.43 8.58950901804 249% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.8 10.1190380762 1075% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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