Big salary much more important than job satisfaction do you agree or disagree provided relevant example if necessary
High salary is more importance when select job.As it will be help us fulfill our dreams and luxuriouslife,but job satisfaction will lead to productivity of job and maintain healthy life style.I disagree,big salary most importance then job satisfaction.
When company high pay scale offer to workers,the responsibilities and work load are increase and company keep hope on their worker will be more achived target.Work pressure will be increase,because of the worker will have to work a long hour on day as well as night.they can not spent more time with them faimily.Reson of workload emplyers can not enjoy them social life,can not enjoy some time family function.they do not spent more time with their chaild.IF they are satisfied with their job,they can enjoy work and do smoothly work.they do not feel stress on work place.They become close with family,friend and their chaild
On the other hand,some human beings think that high salary is nessecary to live in competitve life.For example at present time education fees are increase day to day,so parents requre to high fees pay for their child.Increase a bank balance improve position in the socitey.
To conclude money is not every thing in life its just war agains life.When we are satisfied with work they can make happy every one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9858490566 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79876819647 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 212.0 20.2975951904 1044% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1057.0 106.682146367 991% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 212.0 20.7667163134 1021% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 7.06120827912 949% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140503337527 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140503337527 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846650676874 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881598208114 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 108.1 13.0946893788 826% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -143.7 50.2224549098 -286% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.0 11.3001002004 761% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.8 8.58950901804 207% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.8 10.1190380762 858% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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