Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Every generation believes that their lifestyle is better than any other generation. In my opinion I think that my lifestyle has is better than my grandparents. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays gyms are all over the cities and you can choose what kind of gym is best suited for you. Thus, you can keep a healthy body by going to the gym. In addition, people now know how to train every muscle in your body unlike my grandparent. Moreover, we have different kind of food that can give us the vitamins and minerals that we need. Also, this generation is aware about a lot of thing that helps our body like, drinking the specific amount of water that we need. My personal is a compelling illustration of this, I remember 4 years ago I talked to my grandparent about what did they used to do to keep a healthy body and I was impressed that they did not have any specific thing to keep a healthy body, they were living their life without thinking about the future of their body which resulted bad for him as he grow up, he has multiple disease because of his bad lifestyle.
Secondly, Technology these days are well developed so we can use it to keep an amazing lifestyle. for example, I have an app in my phone that reminds me to drink every now and then to be hydrated. Also, my watch can track my steps, heart pulses and the oxygen in my blood so with all of these information I can know more about my health and consulted my doctor to have a perfect lifestyle.
To sum up, I strongly feel that our lifestyle is better than ever. This is because we are aware that keeping a healthy body by going to the gym and have a healthy diet will increase the performance of our body and we can live longer. Second, technology will remind us to have a good lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: a lot of things
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Suggestion: grows
...r body which resulted bad for him as he grow up he has multiple disease because of h...
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Suggestion: now and then
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...d the oxygen in my blood so with all of these information I can know more about my health and con...
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...ed my doctor to have a perfect lifestyle To sum up I strongly feel that our lifes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25364431487 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35271729451 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 343.0 20.1344086022 1704% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1459.0 100.406767564 1453% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 343.0 20.6045352989 1665% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 151.0 5.45110844103 2770% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241103120503 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241103120503 0.076458572812 315% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154952675337 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702430595747 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 170.1 11.7677419355 1445% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -259.75 58.1214874552 -447% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.7 10.1575268817 1326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.85 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.04 8.01818996416 287% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 139.2 10.0537634409 1385% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.247311828 537% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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