In some countries, at secondary or higher school level there are maybe tow stream of studies Academy of vocational what are the advantage for students and the society of the putting students into two streams at the age of 15?
In the modern epoch, one of topic prevailing in the society nowadays it relates to choosing academic and vocational studies. There are ample number of merits of studying in schools level because education plays an imperative role in everyone’s life. I will discuss my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, they are matters of reasons why vacation is today in important in this country school.Predominantly, it is a help students to head start in career prospects because of students do academy study as well as a vacation then they can get a lot of knowledge in this secondary level.Secondly, in some countries people have not money for studies after high school then they cannot do further studies and if Acacian studies as optional subject in secondary level then students can do easily as well as they can save their own money. As result students are multitalented they can any work with the help of knowledge.
Further more, if students do academy cover casual studies then they can easily find any type of jobs and if every people have a job and they can get a better remuneration then they feel happy as well as society. It’s also help to rising economy economy development of nation because if any person do any new innovation then their country also become self dependent they do not need to export from other countries any type of sources. For example, your money provides a lot of amenities regarding tertiary education and students also intrigued doing in studies so that they have umpteen number of industries because the students are very creative.
To conclude, according to the arguments of vocational studies play vital role in students life because it’s provide a lot of knowledge as well as students can learn many things from vacations subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68876468951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 300.0 20.2975951904 1478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1471.0 106.682146367 1379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 300.0 20.7667163134 1445% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 78.0 7.06120827912 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185855130992 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185855130992 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123646825904 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303047862302 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.6 13.0946893788 1158% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -233.02 50.2224549098 -464% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.3 11.3001002004 1065% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.99 8.58950901804 256% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.0 10.1190380762 1206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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