Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested by a group of thinkers that preserving the environment for forthcoming generations should be the onus of current population. This essay firmly concurs this notion since the present generation is the problem creator which makes them liable for resolving it too and the measures taken now would benefit in future, not otherwise.
To commence with the foremost reason, humans of this 21st century are the creators of the issues as they are selfishly enjoying their stay on earth without even giving a thought about future. Their deeds on this planet has adverse effects on biodiversity which makes them liable to rectify the same. This can be exemplified by the proliferating level of pollution which is either due to industrialization or because of thoughtless use of vehicles that run on fossil fuels. If this level is not controlled now, then our successors have to inhale noxious air, making them prone to various fatal ailments.Therefore, there is a dire need of actions in present to mitigate the detrimental impact on future.
Apart from this, the measures which will be put into action now, will present gradual results as healing the environment is not a rapid process. It took million of years to settle on this planet and reviving the intact situation would also take similar time. Thereby, the actions of today’s individuals are necessary because, then only, any chances of improvement can be guaranteed. To illustrate the same, there is colossal amount of garbage in the whole world which has grave repercussions on humanity but, to minimize this, optimum strategies are required in place such land filling that will dispose the waste in years. Thus, the only way to handle this menace is to take initiatives in present day.
To reiterate, it can be said that certainly, the residents of this planet ought to take revolutionary measures to curtail the problems from root as they are the ones who are reckless using it despite of knowing the fact that it would be deleterious in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ironment is not a rapid process It took million of years to settle on this planet and r...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t that it would be deleterious in future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76506996125 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 20.2975951904 1655% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1659.0 106.682146367 1555% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 20.7667163134 1618% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 7.06120827912 736% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752534328748 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752534328748 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593391635373 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724450754329 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.8 13.0946893788 1297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -269.56 50.2224549098 -537% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.3 11.3001002004 1188% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.72 8.58950901804 288% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 10.1190380762 1348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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