Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
With the modernization of life, people are getting more prone to stress-related illnesses such as depression, anxiety, or insomnia. Without a doubt, we can easily distinguish between life now with our parent's generation. Our parents enjoyed their living as it was a relaxed one. This essay will discuss the causes of an increase in stress and profer solutions to it.
One of the major reasons responsible for the universal rise of stress is growing competition. For example, parents put pressure on their kids to get the first rank which further creates a stressful situation for children during exams. Other reasons are increasing desires and maintaining status in society. This further puts pressure on people and they tend to work extra hours to meet their needs. For example, having the latest model of I iPhone is considered a status symbol. Lack of meeting the expectation of parents or not being able of attaining the desires results into getting depressed. Depression can further cause anxiety, insomnia, and suicidal thoughts.
However, there are ways of tackling this situation. Firstly, the government should run awareness campaigns about the negative impact of stress. Secondly, schools or universities can include an extra class for maintaining mental well-being. Similarly, NGOs can be established specially for encouraging people to approach Psychiatrists, friends, or family members in case of any kind of tension.
In conclusion, although stress-related problems are common government and society can mutually tackle this condition by creating awareness about the problems emerging from pressure in day-to-day life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...xiety insomnia and suicidal thoughts However there are ways of tackling this situati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3984063745 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80945147158 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 20.2975951904 1237% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1355.0 106.682146367 1270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 20.7667163134 1209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 112.0 7.06120827912 1586% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209370200942 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209370200942 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125052673088 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694879979723 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.5 13.0946893788 989% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.75 50.2224549098 -382% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.4 11.3001002004 906% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.52 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.93 8.58950901804 244% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 10.1190380762 1012% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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