Students should choose a university major that prepares them for a high-paying career. to what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the modern-day, choosing a major in university can significantly impact one's career opportunities. Some believe that students should pick their subject area of choice based on their income. I strongly disagree with this statement because one should prioritize their passions and interests over money. This perspective will be discussed in this essay and justified.
Teaching the younger generation to consider money over their happiness is an extremely negative mindset as it also encourages shallow perspectives such as money determines one's worth. Every job in society has its unique importance regardless of the salary they make. For example, a janitor should be as respected as a doctor because they are working hard maintaining sanitation throughout the complex, which is equally important as any other job. There is a saying that money cannot buy happiness. A doctor can live a much more luxurious life than a janitor; however, if the janitor is passionate about what they do, they can live a much happier life compared to a doctor. Many argue that focusing on a job with a good salary can be better in the long run as you will be more financially stable as time goes by. Even though this is true to some extent, can you enjoy the luxuries you own if you are not passionate about what you do?
Pursuing a career that an individual has no interest in can seriously impact all dimensions of their well-being, significantly on their mental health. Numerous research reflects how, despite the good income, many individuals report to be unhappy, stressed, anxious, depressed, and regrets their career choice. They have also shown symptoms of insomnia and have a higher chance of developing chronic conditions such as high blood pressure,
The career path one chooses directly correlates with the subjects an individual decides to study in university. I firmly believe that when making this decision, one should consider their interests and passion over their income as the overall goal in life is to be happy and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03603603604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68675307118 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 333.0 20.2975951904 1641% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1677.0 106.682146367 1572% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 333.0 20.7667163134 1604% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 7.06120827912 694% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217351396884 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217351396884 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132103348161 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634666912326 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 168.8 13.0946893788 1289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -266.52 50.2224549098 -531% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.2 11.3001002004 1179% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.37 8.58950901804 284% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 135.2 10.1190380762 1336% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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