The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While there is contradiction introducing fitness importance in studies make people fit, decrease the number of overweight people. To be very precise, I completely agree with this opinion and think it is necessary for children to be educated of what is required to remain fit and also the kind of diet to be consumed.
First of all, it has been observed that nowadays kids are prone to obesity as they eat more of junk food instead, healthy diet. Unless children being educated about the negatives of having fried food, they will keep consuming it. With the advancement of technology, eatable has now become easy to cook, losing their nutritional value. For instance, different outlets such as McDonalds, dominos has not only given the taste that kids are addicted of but also made it the part of their meal leading to unhealthy body. Therefore, it is mandate to teach young ones about the merits and demerits of different food. It is only possible if little ones get trained in their schools.
More importantly, it has been noticed that work habit also makes people unhealthy. Youngsters who do not prefer physical exercise suffers from various health ailments leading to heart attacks. Because of health issues different fitness centers, yoga centers has emerged in last few years. For example, a study done in Oxford University has given the data that people sitting on computers for entire day weigh more in comparison with people doing work that involves movement of the body. Although people don’t get time to spend in gym, they can keep the track of their diet. Thus, it is required to understand the gravity of remaining fit. Moreover, people should be aware of different health problems can arise and refrain themselves from going to hospitals.
To conclude, I would rather say, maintaining the health education gives the insight of good diet and fitness. It will not only keep the entire world in good shape but will also reduce the burden on health care system as doctors can take care of other serious diseases on priority besides dealing with fat problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96561604585 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46933226317 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.398212455 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247218436584 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629577091984 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049952776647 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137598729806 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650685834531 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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