in many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent
There is an increase in the level of crime and offences are becoming a drastic issue in many nations. From my perspective, this essay will discuss some reasons and suggest viable measures for this problem.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the number of crime is rising at an alarming rate. Firstly, it is clear that many cases of sin started at distinguishing between the poor and the rich in our society. To be more specific, because of unequal treatment for people who are unemployed or homeless, they can not live in needy conditions anymore so they commit crimes to provide for themselves. Secondly, offenses are mainly come from offenders's mentality. To be examplify, there are a lot of kidnappings, murders and arsons that criminals do in order to earn money for their entertainment such as cocain or drugs.
On the other hand, some remedies are available for reduce crime rate. To begin with, goverments should consider higher punishments than those at present. For instance, instead of being imprisoned in 18 or 19 years, murderers or rapists must receive capital offence and compenstate money for victims. Furthermore, cameras ought to be install everywhere in the streets comprise hidden corners. As a consequence, polices and citizens can indentify criminals easily through records from cameras to prevent the peace.
To sum up, eventhough crime is growing global issue caused by the lack of basic needs and activities that unlawful, there are some necessary measures should be applied as soon as possible to create safe life for people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72615942226 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3500065042 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177756589886 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648240418566 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110515752503 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113678998441 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731094091685 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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