One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
describe why you want to work in that country
tell him/her about your skills and experience
ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I'm writing this letter because I’m planning to come to your country to work there. I’ve read a lot about the country on the internet. I came to know that your nation not only provides a good work-life balance but also has the latest machines and technology in my sector, which will upgrade my knowledge..
I have finished my graduation in 2016 and I’ve extensive experience in designing field. Although I’m working as Designing experience, my income is not very decent. I am also Green Belt in lean six sigma. I also attended numerous international workshops for designing softwares like Solidworks and Catia.
It would be great if you find out about the salary packages of a Manufacturingtechnician and Design Engineer. Besides it, Could you also let me know the best ways to find out jobs over there?.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Lots of love
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...radiant health and best of the spirits. Im writing this letter because I’m plannin...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... sector, which will upgrade my knowledge.. I have finished my graduation in 2016 a...
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Line 1, column 575, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sigma' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sigmas'.
Suggestion: sigmas
...ecent. I am also Green Belt in lean six sigma. I also attended numerous international...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est ways to find out jobs over there?. Hoping to hear from you soon. Lots o...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here?. Hoping to hear from you soon. Lots of love Manish
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you soon. Lots of love Manish
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97486869458 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70625 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.785495774 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219717648137 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891045083598 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766242166698 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150231223363 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618689469084 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.