In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
These days it is indeed becoming increasingly vital to possess a private house for people in some countries instead of living in rented accommodation. There are some reasons why this is the case and I believe this trend is not always positive.
One of the main reasons why people, in some countries, would prefer to have their own houses is that the rented accommodation can cause some troubles. While living in a rented apartment, a person may feel anxious about paying rentals on time along with covering monthly utility bills. This may lead to comforts, such as overthinking about the due dates coupled with enough money saved for rents. Another possible reason is the increasing cost of rents. In many big cities, rents are expensive to such an extent that some people cannot afford to pay, even working two jobs at the same time.
However, I believe that owning a house is not always a positive idea since people may not live in the same place for some reasons. People tend to move into other places for some job-related tasks, for example, the people who work for military service usually change their workplaces to the parts of a certain country they live in where it is reasonable to stay in a rented house. This makes the rented accommodation a better choice whereas it is not always possible to possess a house everywhere for the people who change their workplaces to different places.
In conclusion, I consider that the main reasons why people are in favor of having their own houses are rising costs of rents with troubles the rented accommodation can cause, and in my opinion, this trend is not positive as it leads to some discomforts for some jobholders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54485562082 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4938354895 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296140357906 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124011468676 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742073766784 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214924162032 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449891201838 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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