The chart below provides information about homes sold in lowa city, , Coralville, and north liberty in years 2008 and 2009.
The chart below provides information about homes sold in lowa city, , Coralville, and north liberty in years 2008 and 2009.
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Submitted by Patel Romaa on Sun, 04/25/2021 - 10:59
the bar graph illustrates how many homes sold in the main three-city, Iowa, Coralville, and north liberty in the years 2008 and 2009.
Overall, it can be manifested, the highest number of homes sold in Iowa City and second-highest north liberty. However, the alleviating number of houses sold in Coralville city in the given period.
firstly, Iowa city is the most popular place for living because in the years 2008 and 2009 the increased number of homes sold in lowa city which were 850 for the former one and 870 for the latter one. whereas, second-highest homes sold were in North liberty in the year 2008 approximately 500 while 500 increased in the year 2009 ( 600).
secondly, the least number of houses sold in Coralville city in the year 2008 and 2009 which were accounted for 350 in a given period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89142857143 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57817849905 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491428571429 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8190763231 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546930279149 0.215688989381 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282824833481 0.103423049105 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202721748133 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257613879689 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239340708164 0.0819641961636 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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