The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australian cities
The bar chart illustrates the result of a research concerning behaviours of people's coffee and tea consumption in different Australian cities( Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, it is obvious from the figure that people mostly opted for going to café in particular cities during these periods.
According to the data, in last four weeks fresh coffee was purchased by about 44% and 43% citizens of Sydney and Melbourne while with the same indicator of 35% of residents in both Brisbone and Adelaide bought this product. In Hobart about 38% people purchased fresh coffee.
The second refreshment was instant coffee. In Brisbone nearly 53% dwellers consumed this type of coffee meanwhile the number of consumers of this coffee was demonstrated exactly 50% of Adelainians and approximately 58% Melbourne local people. In the same periods, the quantity of instant coffee consumption was the lowest in Sydney while it showed the highest trend in Hobart.
In accordance with the survey results, about 61% of people visited to café for drinking coffee and tea in Sydney when the percentage of visitors in Brisbone was about 55% . In the same time in Melbourne and Habart the percent of people who went to cofé was the highest point showing about 64% while it was the lowest at 50% in Adelaide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, well, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12558139535 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64534622553 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553488372093 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8370214483 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270884232297 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110249476087 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086744996328 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161629364023 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774693155204 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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