There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The number of violent crimes committed is seemingly increasing these days. Although some maintain that using capital punishment is the key to combat this issue, I support those who believe that other alternatives must be considered.
On the one hand, there are some arguments why proponents believe that the death penalty is the solution to deter felony. In the first place, it strikes fear into the hearts of people. When individuals see a criminal being executed via electrocution, read about it on newspapers and watch programs about this happening on the internet or TV, they tend to think twice before committing a violent crime. In addition to this, this suggestion works to deal with re-offending criminals too, supporters think. There are recidivists who committed serious crimes, such as murder, rape and others, repeatedly. If capital punishment were introduced, it would perhaps be possible to save innocent people’s lives or prevent people falling victims.
However, I agree with the opponents of capital punishment for a number of reasons. Firstly, it is morally unacceptable to take a life for a life. There are obvious instances when offenders had been wrongly convicted of murder and sentenced to death, but after several years, it was proven that they were innocent and the incident was an unfortunate accident. Besides being morally wrong, it brings about psychological traumas to family members of those who are sentenced to death, which will be followed by years of suffering and stress. Perhaps, an effective remedy to a growing number of serious crimes could be lifelong sentencing accompanied by physical punishment in jails. After all, who are we to judge and kill a person for an offence?
In conclusion, although capital punishment may seem applicable in certain cases, I am of the opinion that it is wrong to kill criminals and other measures should be considered to remedy the increase in crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, after all, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82086062832 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4036763464 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283231204849 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831734851419 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614211216176 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17502655774 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282278963887 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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