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There is no doubt that access to internet is of pivotal for the community. Internet assist the people to communicate with the world. However, i think governments should focus more on improving the infrastructure of the public transport. I feel this for several reasons, which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, public transport play an essential role to provide the comfort in the lives of people. Certainly people use buses and train for their everyday commute so their improvement should be the high priority of the government.
If the public transport in any country is not up to the mark than it is more likely that people daily routine would be affected which in turn lead to the less productivity of the people. For instance, public transport is my country Pakistan is always a concern for the people. Buses are train service are mostly are out-dated and lacks the modern facilities as well. Especially the train service is so bad that it takes an enormous amount of time to travel between the cities. For example train service which runs between Sialkot to Lahore takes four hours for just hundred kilometers. When I used to travel on that from sialkot to lahore in train for my work , I used to waste two hours extra compared to two hours in my own car. Moreover, because train was old-fashioned with no comfortable seats, I used to get tired upon reaching lahore for my work Which in turns affected my productivity at work. Therefore, from my experience I think government should spend money to enhance the public transport in my country.Secondly, better public transport increases the tourism in any country. If the main public transport like trains and buses are of good quality in any country, chances are much likely that country tourism is on higher side. For instance, public transport in turkey is well-developed and highly ranked among other countries. Due to this plethora of people every year visit turkey. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When last year, I visited turkey I noticed a lot of people from other countries traveling in the buses and trains. When I asked one of the person from United stated who was visiting there he told me he loved turkey because he was obsessed with the trains and buses turkey. In conclusion, from the above mentioned, discussion I can say that government should spend money on transportation because it not only provided comfort to the lives of people but it also increase the tourism in any country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84345794393 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72026673695 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483644859813 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1535443911 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691238692776 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02125514842 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523352603779 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0272539275191 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385428739255 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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