Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Throughout centuries, the world is still facing the gender inequality crisis and in every aspect of life, we should give equal access to both men and women. Due to this notion, many believes that the number of men and women in unversities’ classes provides the same quantity.
From my perspectives, this belief is reasonable to extent that universities in which gender discrimination occurs. In these countries, women are barely allowed to go to school or receive higher education system and have no other choice but left in the kitchen, which later leads to the dependence on the breadwinners in the family. More seriously, due to the lack of knowledge and self-confidence, they might experience domestic violence, punishment and other severe repercussions. Therefore, we need to build the equity in education system at these countries in order for women to have an access to knowledge and protect their own life and choices.
However, the idea of having equal number of male and female students in every subject is misleading in terms of job ability. For instance, in technology degrees, the number of male applicants is always higher than it's of women, so we can barely make sure qualifying every student that got into the school. This idea narrows down the number of qualified male students and enrol ill-prepared female students who might drop out when it comes to difficulty, so it then creates another type of discrimination at school and work.
In conclusion, gender discrimination can hardly be solved by the equal quantity, which later can lead to another kind of gender inequality and serious consequences. However, it can help incapable women in specific areas escape from their disastrous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...se countries in order for women to have an access to knowledge and protect their own life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93116780659 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9260795537 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185041977594 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717787712746 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881432915324 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987378729214 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937492725878 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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