In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
Recently, the phenomenon of recent inventions and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of antibiotics' studies is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that computrized inventions can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, modern inventions can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of advanced airplanes are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered professional inventors. Hence, beneficial ramifications of medical inventions apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, important inventions might increase the consequences of a healthy lifestyle. Moreover, fundamental aspects of state-of-the-art innovations could relate to this reality that the demerits of new airports are negatively correlated. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has demonstrated the downsides of technological devices. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notions of computer programs. In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the recent century's inventions far outweigh its drawbacks, not only do the advantages of medical technology prove the significance of air transport but also pinpoint micro computers implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90638297872 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44202452349 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689361702128 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4935771035 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129413808367 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406168046108 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029791760538 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776027430537 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196665823495 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 11.5310837438 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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