Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Having children is less important than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
These days the new generations are more dedicated to their careers and living their lives meaningfully. They are entangled into meaning of life and improving themselves.
In my opinion having children is not a priority as compared to the generations before, I completely agree with it that is not mandatory to have a child. It is my firm belief people have their right to live their lives and as the generations pass they have got involved in their self-care, and I will develop the ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, in the generation before our grandparents people weren't aware of self-love or self-care, their lives have had only simply priorities as a good job, good life partner and children. Eventually as generations have passed the thought process of people has been changed, they are concern about their passion and what they want to achieve and developing themselves into better people and helping other people.
I have to admit that my opinion on this mater has been profoundly influenced by an own experience. My brother was not married till he was 30 and even after getting married he never really cared to have children because he and his wife were managing and maintaining their lifestyle. Trying to get on higher position in their careers was their main moto.
As a result, they are now in their late 40s and yet don't have a child which doesn't really matter to them.
Secondly, there are more important things to do in life which young generation think will not be able to do if they have a child.
Drawing from my own experience, I too think that I will not have a child until and unless I finished will all the things done from my bucket list.
It's certainly clear to see why people like to enjoy their life freely without any burden on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, secondly, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70287539936 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54820724128 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0073053364 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927514504389 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396334180755 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414739035319 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469875088986 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446388348539 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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