Nowadays an increasing number of professionals such as doctor and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this couse ? what can be done to slove this?
In the cutting edge era, the considerable amount of white callar workers are mignatiy to wealthy nations instead of living in their native underdeveloped nation .This essay will explicate problems such as skills shortage and economic development may cease of their own country along with some solution.
To begin with, one of major problem caused by such brain drain is that the poor countries may deprived of skilled in contemporary era most of the doctors are going to abroad for attaining higher wages and better living standard due to which citizen of such nation struggle to get fundamental faciltes such as medical and education .For instance, according to recent survey by WHO (world health organization) the rate in undeveloped nation is high due to chromic diseases such as cancer because of lack expert docters.To mitigate it, government should offer better salaries with good incentives as well as better amenities to entice them to live and work in their country.
The another problem caused by this issue economic instability of poor countries cannot be overlooked .To elaborate it, due to migration of expert workers especially doctor and teacher developing nations have to rely on foreign technical and in medical as well as education field which casts then billions of dollars and hence destabilize the economy of that nation .To epitome , india has faced economic chrisis as it's annual budget declined from 7.4 percent to 5 percent due to emigration of skilled workers .To cope with this , level authorities income on improving living standard of citizens so that people find to worthwhile to live in their born nation.
To conclude ,skilled professionals are leaving their undereloped countries because of non availability of adequate opportunities and this is leading to shortage of workers and poor economic growth of their motherland and to stop this lawmakers should launch special scheme for educated and expiring youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30844155844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77629598531 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.78413323 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.571428571 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211159766811 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961018700607 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548398536546 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139688300622 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312539944109 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.