There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Recently, the phenomenon of miscellaneous types of music and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas there are various reasons to the question of for what purposes humans need music, there are far more answers to the more complicated question: which one is more significant, traditional or international music? In my mind, while traditional and international music go hand in hand, the most important factor for which humanity needs music is psychological reason.
Obviously, according to the well-known needs pyramid, if people could succeed to pass through such fundamental needs as food and accommodation, they should meet high-level needs like enjoying and gaining peace in their life. Music may be the best solution. Psychologically speaking, listening to music leads to tranquility. As enormous findings of scientists, light music paves the way for promotion of creativity among youngsters as well as it would plunge stress which humans suffer during their everyday life.
On the other hand, music could be divided into two broad categories of traditional and international one. The former stems from culture, beliefs, and traditions of nations, while other nations’ music ends up to so-called international music. Ordinary individuals along with experts are struggling with classification of these types of music in terms of importance. However, they couldn’t find a proper measure to classify them and even they are not capable of answering which one comes first.
Undoubtedly, unlike the fact that loads of people are of the opinion that their nation-wide music is far more important than other nations’, other people, in the same country or even in the same house, experience a great amount of pleasure while they are listening to international music, for instance, rock or jazz. Consequently, the importance of music holds different meanings for different people thanks to personality of humans as well as their emotions and preferences.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments regarding various kinds of music and people’s feelings about music, I am inclined to believe that both traditional and international music have more or less the equal importance in the universe. Can you imagine a world without rock and roll or without the breathtaking sound of the prominent singer: Mr. Shajarian the famous Iranian vocalist?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, more or less, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47027027027 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07356123586 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2030072164 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.933333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460796658679 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166720853305 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943161118173 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266889378944 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615135693774 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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