The graph gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK and other regions.
The line graph delineates demographic proportion of Australian citizens who were original from divers parts of the world from 1976 and 2011.
Overall, the initial impressive from the chart is the amount of the country’s residents born in Asia and different territories all over the world show an upward trend. By contrast, the proportion of UK population settled in Australia experienced drastically a decrease over the given period. With respect to total figures, there is a steady drop in the first 25 years, but later rose significant over later spans.
In 1976, roughly 2.5% original Asia people were migrant to new territory which is Australia. However, over the next 25 years, the figure soared unexpectedly up to around 8%. The demographic figure continued to skyrocket to 15% which outnumber in comparison with other areas. On the contrary, at the first 10 years, Australia residents were born in both UK and other parts incredibly showed a similar dropping trend by 10% and around 7% respectively. The total population of Australia, in the meantime, experience downward trend from approximately 22.5% in 1976 to 21% in 2001.
It is noticeable that, in later 25 years, the country’s residents who came from other parts of the world show a contrast pattern with the former span up to 12.5%. in meanwhile, the amount for Australia citizens of UK descents went down significantly to 5%. The total population of the nation was witnessed a steady growth up reaching a peak at 25%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...teady growth up reaching a peak at 25%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06910569106 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88299664257 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5729974292 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186065204814 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681376858343 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572891831 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110941690388 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426765048898 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.