There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is believed to play a prominent role in life nowadays because of its multifunction and impacts; hence, kind of music is more opulent and common in daily life, peolple listen to music regularly.
Music is neccessary for people. First of all, music affected to people’s emotion and brain because it can stimulate the thought and the creation. For example: Mozart music is believed to help rising the IQ number of humankinds because of its complex melody which means that people are more creative and enthusiastic after listening to music. Music can not only also help reduce stress through funny melodies and vibrant pieces of music but also brings the positive feelings with meaningful songs. In addtition, it is able to educate people to be better or provoke the patriotric through educational songs or national songs. As the result, people are into listening to music .
Music is beautiful, especially traditional music, the symbol of a country. Traditional music can reflect the custom, the culture, the features of people in one country, which is proud of people. However, international music is developing and hearded popularly all around the world as well as tradional music, this is due to the exchange between countries and the open of trading. People also love listening to international music because of not only its melodies and the meanings but also providing knowledge about other countries. In many ways, traditional music still be vital to one country despite the development of many kinds of music.
Music is needed because it brings vast of benefits, especially traditional music. If people do not listen to music, they will have less feelings and be easily negative, futhermore, they miss one of the best thing in the world.
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Suggestion: to rise; rise
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun feelings is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13240418118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70014565436 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9688168067 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472438080805 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207134595584 0.084324248473 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101605656659 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320651910969 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716010794317 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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