In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Printed books and newspaper contribute a huge part in our daily life. However, it is argued that sooner or later, they would be replaced by online platform since it is very convenient for readers to access to information without paying any fee. This essay agrees that readers’ habit shall change from using printed paper to online news. To clarify this statement, the author would like to discuss further below.
First, online reading platform has attracted many readers to change their habit thanks to the no charge policy. Therefore, the readers do not have to pay for the newspaper, instead, the only thing they need to do is to open a website, click on their favorite online news and the article relating to the topic they had chosen shall appear. According to the Guardian report, the percentage of citizens changing their habit from using printed books to online books thanks to the “no fee” policy has increased from 45% to 65% in the last three years. Hence, the no charge policy seems to be a good marketing strategy to make people turn their face on printed books and newspaper.
Second, the benefit from using online platform to read news has also help improve the quality of the environment. As have been mentioned in many reports, paper made from deforestation is one of the main factors leading to the destruction of environment and air pollution because there are less trees to maintain fresh air in the atmosphere. Consequently, reduction of using paper will decrease the proportion of air pollution and protect our environment. Denmark is a prime example in protecting the environment by encouraging its civilians to change their habit from using printed newspaper to reading them online. As a result, the amount of trees being cut in this country has experienced a downtrend, from 60% to 40%, between 2015 and 2020. Such policy has proven its benefit not only for saving a sum of money for Denmark, but also maintain the quality of the environment.
In conclusion, despite the fact that people have been used to the habit of reading printed news and books, they have changed it due to reasons relating to their financial base and the awareness of protecting the environment. Therefore, in the near future, with the development of technology, online reading platform shall replace the original habit and support readers to learn more about daily news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...g online platform to read news has also help improve the quality of the environment....
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ent and air pollution because there are less trees to maintain fresh air in the atmo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97994987469 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59012340762 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50626566416 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9079714495 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1875 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21170729316 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706841048107 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372183182682 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134956189342 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468262379393 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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