People are going to different places for the purpose of travelling or work.
What are the reasons for this?
Is it a positive or a negative development?
The trend of commuting to different countries can be seen due to travel or work among masses these days. There are multifarious causes behind this ongoing process, which definitely is beneficial in my opinion for the overall development of a country as well as an individual.
The reason behind the inclined rate of travelling these days is mainly because of a rise in the advances in aviation and globalization. A lot of people are travelling these days because of the budget airlines that are providing low-cost, affordable and economic ticket ranges from which a distinct range of income people can opt. Moreover, the world has become a global village where every other company is into import and export, for which these companies send their employees to other countries over business trips.
Travelling for any purpose irrefutably brings benefits. Firstly, visiting another country for travel enhances knowledge and broadens the horizons of the travelers as the first-hand experience to learn new things that one can get being into that atmosphere cannot be made by being away from it. For example, tourists always get overwhelmed by visiting places such as the great wall of China or Merlion in Singapore.
Secondly, a traveler with international exposure can have a better career path. Having knowledge of different places provides an individual with an extra edge among others while trying for a better prospectus of life in other countries that mostly allure everyone that can help in improving the lifestyle of any individual. For instance, import and export of the products among different countries is the outcome of travelling.
In conclusion, it is vivid that due to different aspects folks travel around the globe, but whatever are the reasons these bring benefits for anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24567474048 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74226201481 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2282831202 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291359029197 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110214283797 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520434868092 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159948007566 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314772543353 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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