The maps give information about an island which has experienced a constructional developments for its tourists
The maps give information about an island which has experienced a constructional developments for its tourists
Overall, it is obvious that, the island was an open area with several palm trees and beach before the new constructions have been introduced to it.More surprisingly, the renovation works have not had an affect to the natural beauty.
According to the figures, there are two areas of accommodation which has been constructed in the west and central sides of the island. There is a circle footpath which leads to both every house and the beach.
Additionally, a reception centre which surrounded with vehicle track has been located between the two areas of the shelters .From there, if visitors go to the south, they immidiately face up to the pier while in the north side, they can see a restaurant. Looking at the maps, we can notice that tourists are provided with swimming and sailing activities on the island and the trees still remain regardless of the architectral constructions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'development'?
Suggestion: development
... which has experienced a constructional developments for its tourists Overall, it is o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tructional developments for its tourists Overall, it is obvious that, the island ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...onstructions have been introduced to it.More surprisingly, the renovation works hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been introduced to it.More surprisingly, the renovation works have not had an aff...
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... Additionally, a reception centre which surrounded with vehicle track has been l...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed between the two areas of the shelters .From there, if visitors go to the south,...
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Suggestion: From
... between the two areas of the shelters .From there, if visitors go to the south, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10303030303 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94695061145 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1902281939 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.4 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411516114881 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173824254354 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190697554239 0.0843802449381 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339413675201 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.382035253121 0.0819641961636 466% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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