You have recently moved to a different house/apartment. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
– Explain why you have moved
– Describe the new house/apartment
– Invite him/her to pay you a visit.
Dear John
Hope this letter finds you and your family well. I am writing this letter to let you know about my new apartment where I have just moved.
As you know very well that I was living near an industrial area on 92 Ave that caused a number of problems for me. Firstly, the voice of machines is very loud at night time that distracts me to take a deep sound sleep, and prohibit me to concentrate on my work the next day. Also, the pollution from chimneys makes it difficult to take breathe the fresh air. Therefore, I decided to not stay there anymore.
Now, I moved to a one-bedroom apartment that is away from the city center but in a convenient location from where I can take the sky train to go anywhere within few minutes. One interesting thing about the apartment is that it is completely furnished, I didn't need to get nay thing for myself. The lake view outside the window is quite amazing. Furthermore, there is a swimming pool at the back of the apartment in a park where I can go for morning and evening walks
Surprisingly, I got promotion from the position of supervisor to the manager at Macdonald's restaurant and hence I am arranging a party at my new apartment on Saturday 20th in which our common friend Julie is also coming. It would be a great time for us to meet on the same day. I invite you to come to my house one day prior if possible so that I can show you each and everything about my location.
I can't wait to see you.
With regards
Preeti
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...ion from where I can take the sky train to go anywhere within few minutes. One intere...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt is that it is completely furnished, I didnt need to get nay thing for myself. ...
^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... is that it is completely furnished, I didnt need to get nay thing for myself. The l...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch and everything about my location. I cant wait to see you. With regards Preeti ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32258064516 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49762415852 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3238661258 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23544810818 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702178834771 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816793666921 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137967424386 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930642148514 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...ion from where I can take the sky train to go anywhere within few minutes. One intere...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt is that it is completely furnished, I didnt need to get nay thing for myself. ...
^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... is that it is completely furnished, I didnt need to get nay thing for myself. The l...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch and everything about my location. I cant wait to see you. With regards Preeti ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32258064516 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49762415852 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3238661258 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23544810818 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702178834771 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816793666921 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137967424386 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930642148514 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.