The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with the projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the amounts of energy consumed by the United States from 1980 to 2030.
Overall, fossil fuels such as petrol, oil, coal and natural gas are the main energy that the Us has relied on. Nuclear and renewable energy are all insignificant sources.
In 1980, 35 quadrillion units of energy consumption came from petrol and oil. Coal and natural gas were responsible for 16 and 20 quadrillion units respectively. Lastly, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy was equal 4 quadrillion.
Fluctuating in some initial years in this period, energy from petrol and oil has increased steadily. It is predicted to reach 47 quadrillions in 2030, becoming the most sustainable fuel source throughout the whole period. The amounts of energy consumed from coal and natural gas are almost similar. However, while the figure for coal will increase gradually, energy from natural gas is expected to keep constant at 27quadrillion. The nuclear and solar/ wind energy usage will have a marginal growth of 6 and 8 quadrillion. Hydropower consumption had a slight rise in the first 15 years of the period, but it is an unstable fuel and will stay at 4 quadrillions from 2012 and then.
- Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunoties Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families while others think children will find it difficult Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with the projections until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 and 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The number of international visitors going to Australia continues to grow making the Australian government very aware of the importance of its tourism industry The chart below shows the spending patterns of these visitors while they are in Australia 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85890980349 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4191639198 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126146129425 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577869006169 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460417203287 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099797460716 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429001888051 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.