WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
These days, it is becoming increasingly prevalent that females are entering into jobs of the opposite sex and vice versa, which raises concerns about whether or not men and women are excellent at all jobs. Whereas occupational selection regarding gender is justifiable to some degree, it is my belief that both sexes can handle every work effectively.
On the one hand, it is indisputable that not all occupations are compatible for both males and females. For instance, jobs in architecture or in the army that require tremendous physical strength and agility are more likely to be conducted by men. Women, meanwhile, are assumed to be better at caring and nursing due to the patience and meticulousness they possess. Therefore, it would be more efficient if both sexes took on work associated with their disposition.
On the other hand, it is a mistake to base our opinions on conventional ideas about the characteristics of both men and women since such conceptions are often inaccurate. To embark on, although there are certain traits typical of males and vice versa, there are exceptions to every rule. In today’s society, men are showing great interest in childcaring as well as house-related chores, whilst women also have versatility in various jobs (even those requiring both brains and brawn). A salient instance is female gymnasts in Vietnam who participate in different competitions of SEA GAMES and win many medals for the home country. In other words, if women desire to pursue a career of the opposite sex and vice versa, they should be provided with the opportunity to prove themselves capable.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that although there are some gender-stereotype occupations, I would contend that women and men are equal in all fields nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...vice versa, which raises concerns about whether or not men and women are excellent at all jobs...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10580204778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99423045559 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1196274469 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190761693333 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642732052395 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448298143864 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110873381503 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273928610996 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.