The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The ongoing debate about cooperation and competition , which one having more impact to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry or any other field, is an interesting one. There are valid arguments on both side of the debate , and there is no white and black choice, when it comes to deciding what is correct.
However, instilling a sense of cooperation among young people is very critical, when it comes leadership skills in government, industry or any other field. Cooperation is just the ideology of thinking about the team, before thinking about self or individual, and working as a group for the betterment of the society.
Cooperation is a must have skill, for all working in an organization be it government, IT industry or any other field. Team work, cooperation , working as a group, performing as a unit is a neccessity in achieving long term goals. Leader is only as efficient as the team. Its not the leader who works and gets all the credits , but its the team he/she resembles and the combined coherent efforts is what gives the final outcomes. For say, there is lack of cooperation within a unit, and all have a competitive approach among them. So these people just try to compete with each other and say if the person, Raj is stuck with problem , and ask for help from his colleagues Shan , but just to keep the competitive edge, the Shan does not help Raj. This leads to waste of time and efforts of the team , since Shan had already resolved the problem, after 3 days of efforts, but now Raj again has to go through the same efforts. Had there been a sense of cooperation between them, it would help the team and saved them time and efforts.
Furthermore, competition bring a sense of enimity, and jealousy among the group members. They just try to keep an edge and impress their leads. Competition also bring a negative sense amongst the group. Cooperation is positive as in all think for the team, and they work towards one single goal , rather than having individual goals.
However, little sense of competition might also help for people to better at a skill, and acts as an incentive to perform well , and increase the will for all the member of the group to perform better and excel. Apart from this , there is all negative impact of having competitive mentality among the group and cooperation helps to achieve the vision of the organization.
Ultimately, it would be correct to argue, that cooperation is a must among a members of an organization , and we should instill a sense of cooperation among young people for leadership in all skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...debate about cooperation and competition , which one having more impact to prepare...
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...ho works and gets all the credits , but its the team he/she resembles and the combi...
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...m, and they work towards one single goal , rather than having individual goals. ...
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...and acts as an incentive to perform well , and increase the will for all the membe...
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...erform better and excel. Apart from this , there is all negative impact of having ...
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Line 10, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a member' or simply 'members'?
Suggestion: a member; members
...argue, that cooperation is a must among a members of an organization , and we should inst...
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... must among a members of an organization , and we should instill a sense of cooper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77901785714 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68114811397 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466517857143 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0443292218 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.684210526 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356055619142 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112647777657 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983869337106 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207699038933 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528509556388 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...debate about cooperation and competition , which one having more impact to prepare...
^^
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lid arguments on both side of the debate , and there is no white and black choice,...
^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... any other field. Team work, cooperation , working as a group, performing as a uni...
^^
Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...eader is only as efficient as the team. Its not the leader who works and gets all t...
^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eader who works and gets all the credits , but its the team he/she resembles and t...
^^
Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ho works and gets all the credits , but its the team he/she resembles and the combi...
^^^
Line 4, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and say if the person, Raj is stuck with problem , and ask for help from his coll...
^^
Line 4, column 633, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f the person, Raj is stuck with problem , and ask for help from his colleagues Sh...
^^
Line 4, column 677, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd ask for help from his colleagues Shan , but just to keep the competitive edge, ...
^^
Line 4, column 798, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to waste of time and efforts of the team , since Shan had already resolved the pro...
^^
Line 6, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m, and they work towards one single goal , rather than having individual goals. ...
^^
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and acts as an incentive to perform well , and increase the will for all the membe...
^^
Line 8, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...erform better and excel. Apart from this , there is all negative impact of having ...
^^
Line 10, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a member' or simply 'members'?
Suggestion: a member; members
...argue, that cooperation is a must among a members of an organization , and we should inst...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... must among a members of an organization , and we should instill a sense of cooper...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77901785714 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68114811397 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466517857143 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0443292218 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.684210526 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356055619142 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112647777657 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983869337106 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207699038933 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528509556388 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.