The passage and lecture both talk about truth of reaching North pole by Robert E Peary. The author claims several arguments support for the truth of Peary's claim. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, there are no solid evevts that support this facts. And all arguments are inconvenience.
First, the authoe states, committee conduct investigation and concluded that accounts were consistent and persuasive. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this statement. She suggests, this is not compeletly objective, these investigation was occured in two days only and did not examined the record and equipments carfully. these examination are baised.
Second, the passage elaborates on british explorer named Tom Avery. He did same trek like Peary. He travel same distance less than 37 days. This argument is rebutted by professor. She says, Tom did not transfer food during his travelling, furthermore, he used airplane. Peary traveled in unfair conditions whish are different from Tom 's condition.
Lastly, the writer mentions photodraphs that help to calculate the sun position in the skywhich is the same position in the North Pole on that day.The lecturer contradictesa this point. She states, shadow can not precisely show in the pictures. Moreover, dates may be faded with time . Pictures become blurred, therefore it is imposible to calculate the position of sun correctly from these pictures.
The passage and lecture both talk about truth of reaching North pole by Robert E Peary. The author claims several arguments support for the truth of Peary's claim. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, there are no solid evevts that support this facts. And all arguments are inconvenience.
First, the authoe states, committee conduct investigation and concluded that accounts were consistent and persuasive. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this statement. She suggests, this is not compeletly objective, these investigation was occured in two days only and did not examined the record and equipments carfully. these examination are baised.
Second, the passage elaborates on british explorer named Tom Avery. He did same trek like Peary. He travel same distance less than 37 days. This argument is rebutted by professor. She says, Tom did not transfer food during his travelling, furthermore, he used airplane. Peary traveled in unfair conditions whish are different from Tom 's condition.
Lastly, the writer mentions photodraphs that help to calculate the sun position in the skywhich is the same position in the North Pole on that day.The lecturer contradictesa this point. She states, shadow can not precisely show in the pictures. Moreover, dates may be faded with time . Pictures become blurred, therefore it is imposible to calculate the position of sun correctly from these pictures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage and lecture both talk about ...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... support for the truth of Pearys claim. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... there are no solid evevts that support this facts. And all arguments are inconvenie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... And all arguments are inconvenience. First, the authoe states, committee cond...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this investigation' or 'these investigations'?
Suggestion: this investigation; these investigations
...ests, this is not compeletly objective, these investigation was occured in two days only and did no...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'examine'
Suggestion: examine
...as occured in two days only and did not examined the record and equipments carfully. the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ned the record and equipments carfully. these examination are baised. Second, the p...
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Message: Did you mean 'this examination' or 'these examinations'?
Suggestion: this examination; these examinations
...ned the record and equipments carfully. these examination are baised. Second, the passage elabo...
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Suggestion: The
... position in the North Pole on that day.The lecturer contradictesa this point. She ...
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Suggestion: .
.... Moreover, dates may be faded with time . Pictures become blurred, therefore it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35111111111 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78485606285 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.540411800872 122% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5391548426 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3684210526 110.228320801 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8421052632 21.698381199 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375440056012 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101112377898 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159769368959 0.0662205650399 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239064872354 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.326435971233 0.0443174109184 737% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.