some people think be hosted in the international sport event is good and some people don't like that. Give your own opinion
Nowadays, integration is very developed. Some of the country has good relationships. And with countries are still developing , they really desire to have a chance to build better relationships with more big countries. And international sports event is a good opportunity to do it. It is a time this country convine the ability with another countries. I opine that hosting an international sports event is good for the country.
Why I strongly agree with this opinion, I will show some arguments. When your country is chosen to organize each of international sports event, certain that your country is capability to do it. Extremely with big international sports events like World Cup, Olympic or Fifa,... Your country able to hold it. And this country is appreciated so they are demanded to organize it. Because of that, when my country - Vietnam can be held any international sports events, I very proud of it. And I think many citizen of other countries have the same thoughts as me.
In the other hand, some people have another reason to don't like that. When your country is the host, some things affected to citizen's life. Some places will be forbidden to organize the event. Maybe their job and agency can be intervened. They must change and accommodate it in a long time. And many tourists, foreigner come to this country to take part in these sports events. Some people can take advantage of it, but with someone, it can be complicated and they don't like that. Many people explain that street becomes more crowded, more noise,.... But I think this is very easy to do when your country can be more developed after the events. Somehow, your country can generate profits from it
In conclusion, I still keep my opinion that it is good if your country can be hosted an international sports events and I hope some people critical of it can have a different thought to give a hand with the country to build an explosion world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: many citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, still, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78143712575 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7049085489 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476047904192 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.817368686 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4347826087 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355929877692 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111496208335 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885519739978 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252606466708 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610119042275 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.