Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people hold the view that skillful sports players can earn qualifications to derive higher salary from the training centers, meanwhile, others think it may be uneven for those working in other professional fields. While both arguments are reasonable, to some extent, I personally prefer the first viewpoint.
The level of wage paid is likely to be rested on the amount of effort that people put into their jobs including both mental works and manual tasks. Yet, the process of performing brain-demanded jobs tends to be much easier for veterans. Perhaps, the best example of this would be the teachers who intend to convey a great sense of grasp for their young tyros. They frequently spend most of their time either on a desk to get comprehensive preparation for the following lecture or lead the sessions at school. As a result, they have rarely cost too much of physical strengths like sports professionals even though the average wage range of general lecturers is moderately high and attractive.
In contrast, experienced sports players, especially, athletes have to cope with loads of extremely harsh training courses to earn qualifications in getting into the national and international competitions. Furthermore, some of them must engage in the sports club since they were children and live isolated from their parents. Being a veteran in sports not only takes numerous strengths away from athletes but also renders many severe incidents while practicing or competing. In the last few years, I unintentionally watched a TV show called Secret Person. In that show, I had a chance to hear about the tough life of a swimmer who unfortunately got injured with his left hand while rivaling an international competition. Due to that accident, he was then dismissed by his training club and give up his decision to constantly pursuing this kind of sport. Therefore, this example can support the view that skillful sports players deserve to obtain a greater salary range than other professions due to the complicated challenges the athletes must face with.
In conclusion, it is appropriate when every person can receive a great level of minimum wage in different professional fields, but it may be absolutely fair for sports professionals to be entitled to obtain a greater deal from the training center due to what they have to spend on in terms of both time and physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09669211196 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89259821319 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592875318066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.240038365 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.533333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225547832008 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655415345088 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643224080752 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144787129875 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760588808979 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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