You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the oldest coin that I am willing to sell at your shop. Let me explain you how I found your shop.
I came to see the mesmerized view of the lakes in Udaipur and while roaming, my eyes got stuck to one of the relic in your shop. Moreover, I was so fascinated that I end up visiting your entire gallery of museum piece. In addition to it, I enquired about your place in Google listing and found to be legitimate.
As for the item, it is 25 paisa 10 coins of the year 1973. Also, it is not the normal coin as made up of material used today but is constitute of silver coating that makes it more precious. Besides, there is a rhinoceros engraved at the backside of the coin that makes it distinct.
On top of it I am anxious to sell 25 paisa coin each costing not less than 2 lakhs. This old money matters a lot because of its existence till date so, I find the selling price worth it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'constituted'.
Suggestion: constituted
...s made up of material used today but is constitute of silver coating that makes it more pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, moreover, so, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19796954315 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25544139768 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0575493344 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9166666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203020332035 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721296946099 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846327029176 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11353430163 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920801627994 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.