The Internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In our lifetime, the number of people who use the Internet has increased drastically. There are few people who are not in favor of using the Internet. However, whether people should use the Internet is still debatable. Some people say that using the Internet should be managed, while others say the Internet has incredible advantages. I believe that the benefits of the Internet outweigh the drawbacks.
The Internet can have negative impacts on people. First, lots of websites are unsuitable for young people, especially children. For instance, some videos on Youtube have violent contents, which are not appropriate for children. Furthermore, some old people may find it difficult to use the Internet. For example, a number of old people prefer being with real people to communicating through neither Facebook nor Instagram. In addition, the Internet can distract students, so they can not focus on studying. This is because there are lots of fascinating programs on the Internet, so some adolescents can waste time surfing the Internet.
On the other hand, the Internet also has incredibly positive aspects on our life. The Internet brings a lot of benefits to communication. For example, some parents who have children study abroad can easily keep in touch with each other via social networking websites. In addition, the Internet provides us a miraculous tool for finding information. For example, nowadays we can search for information about anything on the Internet using the search engine Google. Also, many amusing websites on the Internet help us to relax after work.
In conclusion, although the Internet has many disadvantages and also advantages, it has improved our lives in so many ways. Government should restrict the unsuitable content on the Internet to use it more effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2787456446 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84435824145 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.580683473 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155056581233 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578284838738 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373419839858 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112670583607 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281811513238 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.