The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
The council of Maple County is saying that the county is becoming overdeveloped that's why they put a idea that development should be prevented on Farmland. Also without any kind of evidence they are assuming that if they stop development of new houses than the prices will be much higher than now.
The council is assuming that if the development is paused then the prices will be high in the future but it is not clear that why it would be. The statement do now have any evidence for price raise. Also council is making vague statement that there will be significant raise in the price but what is present rates and in what manner it will get increased this is not explained.
Additionally by taking the ten years old example of Chestnut County council is assuming that if the price is getting increased now as they measured the same ten years ago then, it may affect to Maple County also which is baseless assumption. Ten year is huge duration for any results, and also the price of the houses are modestly increasing but it is not cleared that what is the exact amount is not mentioned. Also by assuming the history of Pine County where they measured same technique 15 year ago and now prices are double but what is the exact amount before and after. Also 15 years is also big span for taking the example. There might be possibility that there are less amount of area remaining for development in that Counties. Also the population of Pine County and Chestnut county might be high compare to Maple county that's why the house requirement might be higher. Chestnut County and Pine County might have more facilities than the Maple County than the prices might be higher.
Council thought that the prices will be high if they would prevent development of existing farmland in the Maple County without any strong evidence. They assume that 10-15 year old action result and current situation result will be same .So the council is making a -prediction that proposed measure ,if passed then the there will be significant increase in house price in Maple county without any strong evidence
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1700 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.645 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.339 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.62 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.401 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.157 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...at the county is becoming overdeveloped thats why they put a idea that development sh...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...coming overdeveloped thats why they put a idea that development should be preve...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they put a idea that development should be prevented on Farmland. Also without a...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ment should be prevented on Farmland. Also without any kind of evidence they are a...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the future but it is not clear that why it would be. The statement do now have a...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... now have any evidence for price raise. Also council is making vague statement that ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...statement that there will be significant raise in the price but what is present r...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... get increased this is not explained. Additionally by taking the ten years old example of ...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if the price is getting increased now as they measured the same ten years ago the...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t is the exact amount is not mentioned. Also by assuming the history of Pine County...
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Line 10, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are double but what is the exact amount before and after. Also 15 years is also ...
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Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...is the exact amount before and after. Also 15 years is also big span for taking th...
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Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ight be possibility that there are less amount of area remaining for development in ...
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Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there are less amount of area remaining for development in that Counties. Also t...
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Line 12, column 35, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing for development in that Counties. Also the population of Pine County and Chest...
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Line 12, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...y might be high compare to Maple county thats why the house requirement might be hig...
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Line 14, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of existing farmland in the Maple County without any strong evidence. They assume...
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Line 15, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd current situation result will be same .So the council is making a -prediction...
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Line 15, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... current situation result will be same .So the council is making a -prediction t...
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Line 15, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will be same .So the council is making a -prediction that proposed measure ,if ...
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Line 16, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng a -prediction that proposed measure ,if passed then the there will be signifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 55.5748502994 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79781420765 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37846198829 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393442622951 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7524161133 57.8364921388 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 23.324526521 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.70786347227 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 5.15768463074 310% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296630636534 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13346047788 0.0743258471296 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113214908387 0.0701772020484 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127886204714 0.128457276422 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11050279863 0.0628817314937 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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