nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants why do you think people waste food what can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away
Thesedays, many people in countries waste a tremendous amount of food waste daily. In my opinion, understanding the reason of problem that will result to reducing of food waste.
To commence with, the low cost of food seems to be one of the obvious reason excabrating the problem . Due to revolutionary technique technological achievements , people have both quality and quantity of their crops. In turn ,according to law of supply and demand, the prices of crops immensely dropped .The recent research of FAO started that the global crops prices drop to 50% over the last decade and the enable people purchased the huge amount of food without any real need.
Furthermore , the absence of the strict regulation because not everyone aware away from that can be created problems. Consequently, the likely to resist any calls for controlling the consumption of their dietary supplies until they are forced by power of low .In several countries people saw a drop of their national food away from after implementing ban on excessive purchasing of food.
Fortunately, there are some solution to this issue which is supported by both people and government . Firstly , raising awareness immensely this issue is important .Using the social media platforms to draw public attention for the potential dangers of food waste . Secondly ,enforcing laws and regulations for preventing the food wasting and also should make possible rules for people and companies .
To recapitulate, the low cost and absence of regulation invited these problem of food waste. I believe that government should take step and legislation as well as create awareness, then this issue reducing
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also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24150943396 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83192064611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1289052377 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330133887049 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117883764013 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757466548565 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184318284609 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783469105953 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.