2. Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, steady economic growth is a substantial criterion for governments to improve their county’s situation like environmental issues. In the meantime, some people have a contrasting opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and present my notion.
To begin with, countries that have good economic conditions could use innovative ways to create better systems that don’t harm the surroundings. For instance, they can invest in green or renewable energy technologies which are generated from natural resources and don’t deplete when used, such as solar, wind, hydropower, or biofuels. By utilizing the aforementioned systems, fossil fuel usage would be reduced by degrees, and eventually, our habitat would be clean.
On the other hand, some opine that countries are forced to use fossil fuels to grow their economies. The driving force of every nation is the development industry. To achieve this aim, they have no choice but to consuming traditional fuels. Nonrenewable fuels can produce massive CO2 gases or chemical spills that pollute air or water supplies. For example, China has some of the worst air quality in the world. It is also one of the biggest emitters of greenhouse gases, and it seems that industrial activity is never going to end.
In conclusion, considering both views, I believe that countries can achieve both economic growths and have a neat environment at the same time. They need to invest in the practical approaches which lead to a reduction in greenhouse gases or other pollutants. By the administration of these methods, we could overcome global warming problems that threaten our surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...some people have a contrasting opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both sides a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33969465649 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9202963283 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0919355711 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24688214562 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690485547915 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632483126576 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134478079292 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356449365095 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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