you are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home Write a letter to complain about the same to city council In your letter introduce yourself describe the situation say what you want the officer to do for you

Essay topics:

you are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. Write a letter to complain about the same to city council.
In your letter

introduce yourself
describe the situation
say what you want the officer to do for you

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am XYZ residing at Park street beside the temple. I am writing to express my sheer annoyance about the quality of road at lanes 1 and 2 in Park street.

The roads across the lane 1 and 2 are spoiled with a huge number of potholes and this is not only damaging our vehicles but also leading to traffic congestion and accidents at prime times. Moreover, rain in the current monsoon season is filling those potholes with water creating splashes towards the pedestrians. These consequences are consistently troubling the wards in Park street causing obstructions to commute.

To control this menace, we request you to facilitate with the officers of Road and Transport department who can act immediately by closing the gaps. We recommend you produce multiple layers of the road such that the water lagging can be prevented. Also, construct a rainwater reservoir that could store this water away from draining. I request you to have the said road constructed with better endurance that can withstand all weather.
I look forward to hearing from you on this matter.

Yours Faithfully,
XYZ

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00531914894 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70406928901 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4049739793 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170342961655 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660268855588 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515537172766 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873420905946 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419431385171 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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