In some cultures the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Age is viewed differently by people from diverse cultures. a number of claim that various civilizations in Western society have different views regarding aging. People believe that seniors in Western society are not appreciated, on the contrary elders in Asian communities are cherished. Similarly, depending on the culture, youth is either highly prized or neglected. Both views will be discussed in this article.
To begin with, older age is valued all over the world. Wisdom is usually linked with ancient age. Experience comes with age, and in numerous civilizations, younger family members seek advise on relationships or difficulties from their elders. Not merely elder living family members, but also ancestors, are revered and consulted in a variety of civilizations. Grandparents, elder leaders, and employers, for example, are revered in the Far East.
Youth are valued higher in a plethora of countries since a country's youthful, energetic workforce is frequently viewed as an advantage. Most governments prioritize youth education in order for them to be able to take society forward. America is a good example of a country that supports university students through numerous means such as scholarships and student loans. Young people can be well-educated and equipped with necessary information and skills if this is done. As a result, the youth will be able to contribute to the advancement of society.
Age, in my opinion, is not a qualification for anything. Despite fierce commercial competition, we find politicians in their sixties and seventies, as well as company leaders in their sixties, in western countries. Furthermore, as life expectancy rises, older people play an increasingly vital role as customers and voters. On the other hand, even in nations where seniors were formerly revered and blindly obeyed, people are beginning to realize that ancient age does not always imply wisdom. The traditional method of operating a family, a company, or a country may no longer be viable.
Finally, both the elderly and the young are critical members of our society, and they should be respected equally. A well-balanced society will exist. We will value both youth's vigor and promise, as well as mature age's wisdom and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36901408451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98623437043 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6685970735 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8695652174 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4347826087 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04347826087 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133847451177 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405834979536 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480646482994 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754383739206 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266331320236 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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