Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There is no gainsaying the fact is that it is not essential to have good relations on workplace, people should only focus on their work. Personally, I partially agree with this statement. My view points related to this trend would be hashed out in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are several reasons which justify to my opinion. First and foremost is that nowadays, the desires of people is increasing with every passing day. In order to complete their desires, they have to do work a lot. Moreover, if they focus on their work instead of establishing relationship with other, they will be independent. As they have no need to take help from other. They can complete their work by themselves. Hence, it makes them expert in their work. For example, a survey held in particular company the result of that survey showed that workers of that company only focus on their work. As a result, it is helpful for enhancing the budget of company. However, if people do not have good relations with workers, they may get depressed. Apart from this, when they make great bounding at workplace they can promote themselves and earn good salary.
To conclude, having mulled over the aforementioned information, it is clear that focusing on work provides many benefits to folks but they should also have relations with others because it helps to entertain themselves
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- Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work To what extent do you agree with this statement 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, for example, in particular, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6315564177 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9121867143 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219403701159 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790778595655 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606951130058 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14594853993 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514116818989 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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