Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some information sources supposed that sharing as much knowledge as possible in this modern world is something people ought to do, whereas others convey the opposite opinion due to various information is too dangerous or too priceless to approach. From my perspective, this essay will analyze the benefits of sharing knowledge as well as which kind of it should not be transported freely.
On the one hand, from the first civilization till this contemporary century, people always figure out how to popularize all data to every single guy due to their thinkings of the more you know, the better life you are able to get. Consequently, some information helps them up to date and get the latest information. Thus, anybody is able to contribute their knowledge and skills in order to develop many aspects of life such as scientific research, business, or the academy. It is just like the ticket to the land of wisdom where everyone has equal opportunities even they are in the poorest part of the Earth. In this way, a doctor, for instance, can get the healthcare information to heal his patients, whereas he lives in a nation that is not able to afford that kind of data.
On the other hand, much intelligence requires income in order to be produced and be maintained. Everybody knows that numerous people whose contribution to science and technology is undeniable fact need payment to deserve their lives. If they do not get paid, they will not able to keep on working and developing our world. Furthermore, there still needs some censorship in launching information on the Internet due to countless cybercrimes finding ways to hack personal information or authorities' confidential data. Thus, it causes chaos in normal life, as well as the Internet such as some terrorist organizations, can reach the information freely and set up explosive products and harm the people.
In conclusion, everyone has equal opportunities to achieve knowledge with the selection of censor teams and share it to improve our society. Besides, no one had better underestimate the power of intelligence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, you know, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01418439716 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95950402113 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5523103773 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153758364879 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514039352213 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429872056802 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922655564628 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548692088338 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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