Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
However, there are certain people who repudiates such sharing of information. First, they believe that the information can be misused by some people for pernicious purposes. For instance, the advancement in nuclear physics led to development of nuclear weapons by several different nations. Secondly, if the information is shared freely then it can diminish the value of researcher. The researcher might not get enough credit or recognition for such valuable information.
In my opinion, the benefits of sharing information outweighs the disadvantages of it. Knowledge should be accessible to everyone, as it will help people in getting enlightened about different things. Furthermore, such information could serve as base for further advancement in a field of study. For instance, Galileo's work served as a base for Newton and Newton's for Einstein. The contribution made by these eminent personality in the field of science is invaluable.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why some people agree with idea of sharing information and why some rejects such idea. There are both advantages and disadvantages of sharing information freely. However, the benefits of sharing information outweighs the disadvantages for the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ed to development of nuclear weapons by several different nations. Secondly, if the information i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61497326203 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16884516581 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.2043282533 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7692307692 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270657179204 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102629040889 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792635538075 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197181793801 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764553660944 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.