You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are doing well.I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the wonderful arrangements that you made on the occasion of ninetieth birthday party of my grand mother.
This birthday party was so special for all of us.They took care of each person,specially an elderly one.As this was a surprise birthday party, we gave strict instructions to the staff to make sure detail shouldn't be reviled. They took this into consideration so well.
The food was exactly as per our expectations.All elderly enjoyed it thoroughly.We didn't list welcome drink in a menu,but staff went out of their way and served it with your permission.The hotel didn't even charge for it, which was beyond our imagination.Overall,it was indeed a successfull party.
Hospitality and decoration were totally appreciated by all our guests.I must say,you and your staff have done tremendous job and made this a memorable event for lifetime.
My grandmother has conveyed her blessings to you.
Hope to receive such kind of extra ordinary support and a great hospitality in future as well.
Yours sincerely,
Rahul Raj
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...ty in future as well. Yours sincerely, Rahul Raj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14207650273 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19789339122 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704918032787 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5114013244 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.625 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272775150172 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890390696905 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766503852178 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106982812421 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788429744031 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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