Some people believe that employees are more useful to a company, while other believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, experienced as well as fresher, both employees are beneficial for the company. A host of people say, elder are more useful whereas some believe that new commers are better. Each view point has their own justification, I will discuss both the views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, elederly employees are experienced person, who know more than freshers. The most obvious benefit of giving opportunity to elder employee is that they are ready to face challenge. To elaborate, the experienced worker already know how to tackle with situation in a company. The main reason behind this is that they are aware about ups and downs in a company in which a fresher is not aware about that. To cite an example, in 2018 the well known Reliance company give their suggestion that giving more opportunities to a company help to increase profit without any problem.
Apart from this, fresher employees were also provide benefits to a company. One advantage of giving opportunity to fresher help to generate new ideas. To clarify, new employees learned every skill by the help of technology in which they know how to perform activity more faster. The minds of fresher are generating extremely different ideas which are beneficial for a company whwereas, old worker has old methods to perform work which work slowly and less profitable but young employees have born in state of the art their minds are sharp then younder employees. Hence, they are beneficial than experienced person.
In conclusion, both points has their own views which already discuss but according to my prespective giving first priority to young employees is benficial for industry as well as for the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
... from this, fresher employees were also provide benefits to a company. One advantage of...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...which they know how to perform activity more faster. The minds of fresher are generating ex...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ung employees is benficial for industry as well as for the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, as for, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05376344086 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67117205251 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2692991591 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294440098052 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943913577561 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700422193749 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193918271084 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086089553924 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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