Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that sponsorship in sports will cause negative consequences, but some people think it is positive. However, I believe that it is positive or negative depending on what products are advertised, how they are advertised and how people receive them.
First, the main benefit of sponsorship is promoting any game and bringing in income for its own company. The more money pour into will help reduce distractions for the players, and they will have more time to focus on practising for the match. In any competition, big or small, there is always a sponsor. They make the most of their products about their company or press conferences after the game to display their products as much as possible. In addition, sponsorship will enhance their public image to everyone more efficiently or in international tournaments. For example, advertising to the world and fans tend to use products that their players love.
On the other hand, some disadvantages can happen and affect people's health and psychology. When young people see sponsored advertisements for sports, they will imitate their idols and use those products without knowing the benefits or harms. Imagine how significant sporting events like the Olympics or World Cup, where sponsors advertise harmful products like alcohol or tobacco, teenagers or young people will buy and experience to feel close to their idol, health problems will certainly be seriously damaged because the sponsors want to maximize their profits without caring about other related issues.
In conclusion, despite its critics, sports sponsorship has plenty of good news for sports players, fans, and sponsors alike.
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- Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34600760456 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73719366831 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9879651419 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194247886114 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788657746799 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892714895562 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140917863571 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716711275215 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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