Attendance at cultural events in Great Britain
The attendance proportion of British citizens at cultural peformances and exhibitions in three different years is demonstrated in this table.
Overall, it is of not that almost every event remained its popularity in different periods despite changing slightly in a particular year, otherwise, cinema increasingly attracted a considerable number of visitors.
It can be clearly seen that the percentage of classical music stayed stable through a ten-year period and is interestingly twice as much as the ballet figure (12 and 6 percent respectively). Cinema proportion rocketed by 10 percent at each time statistics reported and ended up at 54 percent in 1997-1988, constantly obtained the highest rank. In contrast, contemporary dance, was the least attractive cultural art, was enjoyed by only 4 percent of interviewees in 1987-88. There was a marginal dip by a percent in 1991-92 before recoverd to the initial one.
Likewise, plays witnessed a slight drop by one percent in 1991-92, however, it levelled off at 23 percent. The proportion of opera followed an opposite pattern, increased by one in a hundred at the same time before plateaued at 6 percent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... same time before plateaued at 6 percent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13767279177 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3160272662 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161454460771 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069184869437 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613339816999 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105429610015 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589155023268 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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