The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The given maps illustrate the changes of a museum and almost things surrounding this area over two years namely 1990 and 2010.
In particular, the general area was divided into 2 section, meanwhile the western one contained more functions, the eastern one had exclusively been built for the car park and the garden (each services had occupied relatively equivalent area) before the garden was removed to give way to the car park in 2010.
Concerning the former one, there were some small details that we can see in the north of this area, while the store room was enlarged a bit, the entrance of the museum was witnessed the opposite trend, namely the reduction in size to give space for the unnamed area which was to the right of the store room, the authority noticeably reconstructed this unclear area by knocking down the door between 2 rooms. Moreover, the area which was below the entrance could also experience this renovation, because the door between rooms was pulled down to expand the size of the Shop on the right area. Significantly, because the mentioned variation, the upper area could be offered to broaden while the under area had to be shrunk; otherwise, the cottage in this region was converted to a café which could serve for entertainment.
Additionally, the places which surrounded 2 main area including the garden, the Path and the main Road was remain unchanged.
Overall, this museum experienced the introduce of new facilities and renovation of existing ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sections'.
Suggestion: sections
...ar, the general area was divided into 2 section, meanwhile the western one contained mo...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... garden, the Path and the main Road was remain unchanged. Overall, this museum expe...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed. Overall, this museum experienced the introduce of new facilities and renovation of exi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, as to, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.984 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65209351268 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.5587424 43.030603864 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.0 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7142857143 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833262831668 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582446402933 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778857507026 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079330230054 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828588308011 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.