Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for-environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, deforestation or logging have had many negative impacts on our Earth. In hindsight, we could comprehend that the results of deforestation are also badly affecting every person, every country, and every region.
Logging is the most common reason, for example, for making papers or magazines or toilet paper, laying out a golf course, or building resorts. These are activities to help people earn so much profit, so they could not give up their benefits. However, we can find suitable solutions to have effective results in both sectors. Firstly, we should stabilize deforestation and reforestation to balance input and output. Secondly, we could combine the natural environment and the resort, we will have a lovely fresh resort for holiday and plant the tree to save the Earth. Thirdly, we could choose renewable papers and after using them, they will be recycled again. There are some ways to get stabilization between environment and economic benefits.
Besides that, many protective forests have been felled that have become one in many triggers to create natural disasters like erosion, flood, storm, etc. So the government must take action to protect important forests.
In conclusion, we should recognize the individual responsibility to prevent, inhibit, and save our life (lives). I believe my solution could decrease the anger of mother nature after many cumulative actions of people over many centuries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38839285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75153235948 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669642857143 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1490761269 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116467550874 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039280200121 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209156115365 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635478702843 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256005899398 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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