Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?
Nowadays, most people believe that students should go to university after high school in order to get better jobs in future while others have contrast viewpoint. Although the determination and focused attitude play an enormous role, I believe colleges guide people to achieve goals and people should attend these.
On the one side, in school students get rudimentary education but colleges provide them professional knowledge. There is no profession that does not require skills. In high school, students are taught some basic skills which just need for their daily life, not for their jobs. Moreover, they don’t have a chance to put those skills into practice. In contrast, colleges are required to teach particular skills to students and make sure they use those competently. For instance, a teacher learns how to impart knowledge to students and make the lesson more interesting. In addition, people who graduated from a university will be offered the better jobs with professional environments. Hence, university is necessary for a successful life.
On the other side, university can’t teach us how to stay focused and determined. Successful people are concentrated toward their goals. They do regular practise and put huge efforts. These efforts help them to reach desired destination. If these qualities are adapted, only education can’t be helpful. Endeavours lead to success; nevertheless, education is not enough. Hence, concentration and determination are the other factors which are paramount to achieve ambitions.
In conclusion, university education is must but not enough for a successful life. In my perspective, universities help students to imbibe all the skills required for a profession and should be attended. There are other factors like regular efforts and practise help people to achieve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48581560284 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90886721516 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.562670345 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.35 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189463197882 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590205063239 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429213764276 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125766120719 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260830802226 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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